fix some mistakes in my paper.
The two stakeholders need to be specific organizations, not groups of people like conservatives and advocacy groups. The introduction needs to focus on the two organizations, where they stand on the issue, how they differ…the thesis needs to tell us what common ground they have and a specific compromise.
Also, in the introduction I need to define the two stake holders and show the differences between them.
In thesis, I should mention quickly the common ground of the two stakeholders.
